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the shadows bruise the
sunlight while the moon
weeps in the darkness
shut your eyes moon, go to sleep
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HumanScolopendra Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's one of the strongest poems I read on here
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
thank you :blushes:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014   Writer
I always love how your words seem so fragile, but a strenght somehow slumbers just beneath - a delicate balance you've simply mastered :heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
this is beautiful, thank you so much :thanks:
it made me smile :blush:
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014   Writer
Ah, I'm glad, 'cause I could not have meant it more :heart:
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SyaraSirene Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So beautiful, yet it has a sad and fragile tone to it.
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BlueDiamondSnow Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this. You are the master of short and powerful.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
thank you so much! :thanks: :heart:
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shep4life Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
:thanks:
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