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you should have
emerged with life; your
little roots should have
clutched the soil in their
tiny white fists, and
grown

i did not mean to trample
you, i did not mean to
let my body kill
your body
i had a dream for you
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Basmah999 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
truth.
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MixedSunlight Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Photographer
 Your poems are so short, but they carry so much emotion, so much feeling, that they can affect the reader.

Well done.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014
thank you for these kind words :thanks::heart:
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MixedSunlight Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2014  Student Photographer
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014   General Artist
you know how to make me crumble, dearling :huggle:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so incredibly sad. :hug:
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Cleft-Palette Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
Your descriptions are at times, just as relevant and backed with feeling as your actual pieces.
This is very sweet, and rather sad. Good.
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scribblingnooly Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Professional
Poignant. The affect we have on everything rippling around us. Beautifully stated with an economy of word which intesifies the expressiveness.
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CurtainRodFace Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, goodness... This makes me think "miscarriage" and it is one of the saddest things I've ever read...
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BlueSoulGreenMind Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
"I meant to be everything but a weed."
Is what came to mind as I read it. This was sad but felt good.
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