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i will bury myself
outside in the garden;
like the spare key
or the dead dog,
i'm never there when
you need me
haha
ha fucking ha
i got shut out of my house today
and also i miss my dog
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flummo Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student Writer
you knock me sideways
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emsoileau Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that is the poignant-est of short shit i have read in an age.
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successwithhonor Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
i don't know why precious things get lost.
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successwithhonor Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Writer
it's because we start to forget their preciousness,
we must learn to love the ordinary
for it too can be beautiful
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SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Speechless.
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phinx400 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
kinda shite
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Professional Writer
A sharp despondency. An effective piece. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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MutePoetess Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm really sorry about you getting shut out of your house, and about your dog. This is a lovely (and sad) poem though. I really like it, and I can relate to the feeling, I think. It's very simple but it conjures up a lot of feelings. Good writing.
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FridayatMidnight Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This kinda made me laugh xP
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