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i keep
butterflies
in my
stomach;
pierce holes
through so
we can
breathe
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annafuru Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
These words are so strange yet they mean something so true to me!
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SpiderwebWisher Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Huggle! 
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Student Writer
Uneasiness is just the push we need to get off the cliff and onto the air, right? 
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squibblyquill Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
if one imagines love as flight, I suppose
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SublunaryComet Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooh, I love this!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
i'm glad you like it :thanks: :heart:
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thedirestraits Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I don't get it
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
and that's okay.
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thedirestraits Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
What does it mean i like it but i don't understand the free poem.
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sonicallyy Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
I love it 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
:heart:
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TheUnHolyDarkth Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very simple but very expressive indeed. i love it :)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
thank you so much! :thanks:
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Mardoqueo Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!  I love it
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
thank you so much! :)
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schamelon Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Perfect. 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
:heart:
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, butterflies :D
But who is "we" can breathe? I thought that the holes may be there so the butterflies can breathe? Like you do with boxes that contain an animal in it? I don't know xD
But great work <3
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ooh-shinyspoon Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
perhaps the butterflies are meant to be a metaphor - like when someone is nervous, they have trouble breathing..
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That would be a possibility.
Butterflies -> means nervousness, trouble breathing -> piercing holes so breathing becomes possible again xD
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ooh-shinyspoon Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
when you pierce holes through things, air flows out - so maybe it releases pressure as well
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
uh yeah o.o
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013   Writer
An efficacious write. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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kissysaltcoatedangel Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I agree with PassionateVirgo, I can almost hear the fluttering of the butterflies' wings. :butterfly: (Butterfly) (for lack of a better icon). 
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Pandalings Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
the words literally seem to ooze emotion
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