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i will not
love for fear
of losing

and if a
fondness
should creep
through like
ivy, i'll cut it
back
ivy loves a wreckage
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:iconfableweaver55:
fableweaver55 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely.
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ScotchRock Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
i like how u write
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
thank you :blushes:
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delirious-eyes Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
fantastic.
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Seilf Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Fierce message, great imagery. (:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
thank you very much! :thanks:
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:iconrvin09:
rvin09 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Student Writer
Featured this in my blog:

psyways.blogpost.com

Have a nice day.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
that is an amazing thing for you to have done :blushes:
thank you. i'm happy that you liked it that much!
:tighthug:
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:iconrvin09:
rvin09 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Writer
I did, and you really are a good poet.

It's here now, since I've moved: psyways.net

Looking forward to reading more of yours.
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squibblyquill Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
indeed indeed
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013   Writer
The emotion is lucid and overwhelming. A bold poem. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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kissysaltcoatedangel Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
How come your poetry never misses a chance to leave me completely breathless? 

This is just, heart-wrenchingly lovely! :heart: 
(you do have you're way with words) 
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
agh, i am blushing :blushes:
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:iconkissysaltcoatedangel:
kissysaltcoatedangel Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
aww, you deserve my praise and more! :heart: 
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is perfect
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
:heart:
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:iconpereyga:
Pereyga Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
<33 :hug:
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luv2av8mx Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Staunchly Beautiful. Really grabbed me the moment I read it!
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
thank you very much :thanks:
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Hikkicchi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist
I don't understand why I can't favorite this, so I'll post instead. Absolutely lovely poem! <33 qvq soinspiring akjfdj;ad
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
oh i'm sorry that you had trouble faving it! letting me know that you would have is good enough for me ;) thank you so much
:heart:
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Hikkicchi Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist
Yw yw. >v</ <33
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LilSunnyGirl Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww that is beautiful! :heart:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
:tighthug:
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MilesTailsPrower-007 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow, really good use of words. You conveyed the feeling perfectly without overwording. :>
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
thank you so much :tighthug:
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:iconskshigan:
SKShigan Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Unfortunately it's very true, once you've not that little confidence of yourself or others that makes you sure, you start also fearing love as for the fear of losing it...
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
which do you think is worse? not loving because you are afraid of yourself and your ability to love, or not loving because you have such little faith in others?
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:iconskshigan:
SKShigan Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
Probably the first. Being so afraid that everything you do may be a faux pas can make life an hell...
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faizza Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is just superb :)
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
thank you! :tighthug:
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faizza Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awww welcome :D :hug:
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Deviantinterested Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013   General Artist
I agree with ounmaskedo - those who fear this, lost something dear...

Lovely words and says it all, nothing else needs to be added.

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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
thank you very much :blushes:
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Deviantinterested Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013   General Artist
:-) You are very welcome. 
I write too, have done so for many, many years and always appreciate others' works. ;-)

I need some spare time to look through your writing pieces, more, but I have very little time most days.

I wish you well though. Take care. :-) 
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ounmaskedo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
everyone who has this fear should know...how impossible it is to let someone in...  no matter how hard they pull at the rusted handle ... you cant let them open it ... they must not get in ... it gets worse and worse , the more you care for that person ....

people whit this fear .. lost something dear
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
i love this, i think it should be a poem :heart:
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justcallmefaye Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that is just an absolutely wonderful, succinct visual. "should creep through like ivy". mm. lovely line. :)
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
thank you so much :tighthug:
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declanewan123 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
xx
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
xx
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imunchoncereal Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
aghhgh i love your work<3
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
aw thank you so much, i'm glad you like it :tighthug:
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Djidji-Thirbaan Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
brilliant 
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
thank you.. :thanks:
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:icondjidji-thirbaan:
Djidji-Thirbaan Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
you are welcome :)
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
Last stanza. . . :faint:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
:heart:
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ax0l0tl Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
sometimes I start to think this, but most of the time I just think that without love I have already lost.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
:cling:
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