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a scalpel from
wrist to elbow-
you will not be
living under my
skin anymore
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:icontobassinesia:
Tobassinesia Jan 17, 2014
I love this. They never said being good was easy, eh?
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haphazardmelody Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh there are so many ways this could be interpreted.

It's always hard to cut out that one thing that's the worst part of ourselves. But should we even try?

I love this. :heart:
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:iconoaklungs:
something i think about a lot :(
i'm very glad you like this :hug:
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haphazardmelody Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I do too. :hug:
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:iconnyuuh:
I like how "physicial" this is. A vivisection of a feeling... Or rather mixed feelings shared so quickly, so briefly but so intensively... Thanks for sharing, once again.
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feel-like-fame Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, this is amazing
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Mardoqueo Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.Simplicity.....that is what i like most in your work.
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:iconoaklungs:
i'm so glad you like my writing :thanks:
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:iconmardoqueo:
Mardoqueo Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I m not a writer but I read a lot,and your work....belive me your poetry is pretty and clear as cristal.Keep pushing this way.
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