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a scalpel from
wrist to elbow-
you will not be
living under my
skin anymore
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Tobassinesia Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
I love this. They never said being good was easy, eh?
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh there are so many ways this could be interpreted.

It's always hard to cut out that one thing that's the worst part of ourselves. But should we even try?

I love this. :heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
something i think about a lot :(
i'm very glad you like this :hug:
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I do too. :hug:
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Nyuuh Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
I like how "physicial" this is. A vivisection of a feeling... Or rather mixed feelings shared so quickly, so briefly but so intensively... Thanks for sharing, once again.
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kittycommunism Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, this is amazing
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
thank you :thanks:
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Mardoqueo Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.Simplicity.....that is what i like most in your work.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
i'm so glad you like my writing :thanks:
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Mardoqueo Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I m not a writer but I read a lot,and your work....belive me your poetry is pretty and clear as cristal.Keep pushing this way.
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