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a scalpel from
wrist to elbow-
you will not be
living under my
skin anymore
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Tobassinesia Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
I love this. They never said being good was easy, eh?
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haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh there are so many ways this could be interpreted.

It's always hard to cut out that one thing that's the worst part of ourselves. But should we even try?

I love this. :heart:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
something i think about a lot :(
i'm very glad you like this :hug:
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:iconhaphazardmelody:
haphazardmelody Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I do too. :hug:
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Nyuuh Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
I like how "physicial" this is. A vivisection of a feeling... Or rather mixed feelings shared so quickly, so briefly but so intensively... Thanks for sharing, once again.
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kittycommunism Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, this is amazing
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
thank you :thanks:
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Mardoqueo Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it.Simplicity.....that is what i like most in your work.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
i'm so glad you like my writing :thanks:
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:iconmardoqueo:
Mardoqueo Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I m not a writer but I read a lot,and your work....belive me your poetry is pretty and clear as cristal.Keep pushing this way.
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segura2112 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Stunning and powerful piece. Thank You
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
thank you :thanks:
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:iconfairra:
Fairra Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Student General Artist
It's just great. As if you'de be writing down my thoughts...
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
thank you so much :thanks:
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TwinWolfSister Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sounds like a suicide note to me. pretty none the less.
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JoePhilliacTheBlack Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so vivid and potent!
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
thank you :blushes:
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Student Writer
An abstract poem for the masses. I think that the length of the scalpel's run really drives in the size of whatever is being cut out. Basically saying that no matter what we are inflicted with or are struggling with, we an cut it out and move on. You can end it even if we're talking about lying to stealing to being insensitive and I would even go as far as to say addiction. 

This is a beautiful piece of work, my friend. Thank you. :hug: 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
your comment is once again spot on :hug:
thank you so much!
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
My pleasure! Glad to see I understood the message. 
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Rema-Alkhany Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
nice.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
thanks!
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Permafry42 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Student General Artist
What lies beneath your skin can be whatever or whoever you want to become. Only you can choose who you want to be, and never let anyone tell you otherwise.

That said, this is a really powerful piece!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
very true! thank you so much :hug:
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:icondexmanips:
DEXMANIPS Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
stunning: this one gives me a tingling sensation under my own skin ;)
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
aha thanks ;)
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Toriaaa1819 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Even though it's short I get so many different images in my mind! And I think that's what makes this so good. :)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
thank you! :thanks:
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Rosella-of-Daventry Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Terribly depressing, excellently put. :rose:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
thank you :blushes:
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:iconanila73:
anila73 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh stop it with your beautiful words.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
OH STOP IT YOU
:iconsupertighthugplz:
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013   Writer
You write with such dynamism and potency. This is great writing. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
thank you for reading! :rose:
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:iconjohnashleigh:
JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013   Writer
My pleasure. :)
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ghost-of-a-gone-bird Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
oh,my stomach dropped,this is beautifulHeart 
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
thank you :tighthug:
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