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when you claim your slot
in the ground, it will claim your
body in return
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
What a short but punctual way to say it. I think this is something that should be shared with a lot of people. 
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student Writer
Very powerful. :heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
:thanks:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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lividlotus Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
is it not peculiar that we have to buy our own graves.
i adore your use of words :heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
thank you :thanks:
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Clamshire534 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
very transcendental
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
:)
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Mackismycat Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this piece!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
glad you like it! :hug:
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arsenic-sea Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love this :blackrose:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
i'm glad you like it! :rose:
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, the body will go into the ground one day ...
I like this piece interesting thought
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
glad you like it!
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sounds as if it's some kind of "trade" thing here xD
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bittersweet-ink Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love poems like this where immediately ideas come to my head, well done c:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
thank you! :heart:
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:iconlonewolfhowl87761994:
 good  job  i like this short poems they make you think and give you a image  well some times
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013   General Artist
I really like the simplicity, poems like this always make me think more than longer pieces :heart: lovely work :)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
thank you! i'm pleased you like it :thanks:
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013   General Artist
No problem :love:
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anila73 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh.
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Sh-tInk Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
Though spirits remain.

I enjoy this piece.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
glad you like it :thanks:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013   Writer
A philosophical and thought provoking piece. Well done. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.
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