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i opened my
mouth;
you showed
me your
teeth
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:iconooh-shinyspoon:
First day of kindergarten...
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SitaraChe2000 Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
do you mean teeth as in smile? because first i thought it was anger
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:iconoaklungs:
i did mean anger/agression :P
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SitaraChe2000 Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
oh,brilliant
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jswebb Dec 18, 2013   Writer
This is a very enjoyable kyoka! I very much enjoy the satirical (for me) presentation of the initial image and its juxtaposition with the reaction. It leaves the piece open to different interpretations.

Many thanks for sharing this! :)
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TristanCody Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
This strikes me as a way to say that you opened yourself up to this person and they, in return, showed you an even deeper side of themselves. In a sense, I believe this is a poem about trust and understanding. It is beyond simple and yet so powerful and thought-provoking. 

Well done. :clap:
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 hmm   ilike this one to good job
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