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the sun did not
kiss my skin
yesterday, he slept
late

showed his
face around noon
and then went back
to bed; the
earth exhaled
his head is in the god damn clouds
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wxnderlust Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't even have words to describe your poems. Brilliant work
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imaebyjune Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I see beauty in your words. :o (Your poems are awesome!)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
thank you so much!! :tighthug: :heart:
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imunchoncereal Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
your words are an experience.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
oh thank you so much :blushes:
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
The nature theme of this poem really, really is enhanced by your depiction of the sun and the sun's demeanor. It just allows a much more hearty experience that is compelling and sad and purely beautiful. Love it so much. 
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Student Writer
Oh, wow, this is just shiver-inducing. Gorgeous.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
thank you :thanks: :heart:
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome. :heart:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Professional Writer
This is incredibly evocative for a nature poem. Accurately delivered in both imagery and conviction. Thankyou.

Regards,
John.
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