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a spider weaves
his silver lies on my
front door, and i
walk right in;
the flies laugh
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:iconsrinath-ste-v:
srinath-ste-v Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i love the raw unspoken beauty to it ...
weaving a trap of lies..nice
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hate when that happens...
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ordinary-monster Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
I know that people tend to believe in lies they wish were true and go for even the small gain they think there is for themselves, regardless of what happens after that. I also know that sometimes one just cannot see a lie as a lie although everyone else does. But I do not know what kind of diet would help me to come up with such elegant imagery myself...
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Tobassinesia Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Why does the spider weave lies? :noes:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
it's in his nature.
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:icontobassinesia:
Tobassinesia Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
Some of my spiders weave lies. Some of them weave truth. It's hard to tell the difference between the two until I take a closer look.
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SoraLove Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Wow, your poems are so amazing! I love how you write! Keep it up!!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
thank you so much! this means a lot to me :tighthug:
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
I have to ask how you come up with these! It's just so human. The way you make the flies represent us when we notice how stupid we are for just walking right into these spider liars is just brilliant. 
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TasLDaeD Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this, so beautifully done. 
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