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crescent moon- silver
hook in the sky fishing for
stars; you catch my eye
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shewhoisadreamer Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Student Writer
This is perfect.
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DeriveAnemone Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This embodies everything I love about haikus. Heart 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
:tighthug:
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TristanCody Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013  Student Writer
I relate to this poem every clear night when the stars droop down to say hi and I'm just there in my human pleasure with a coffee cup. 

Love this. 
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013   Writer
That. Is. Truly. Beautiful :heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013
aww thank you :tighthug:
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carusmm Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
emotive, poetic.
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i don't know what the reader before me was talking about. this is beautiful as it is. the line breaks are perfect, the emphasis exactly where it needs to be. a wonderful haiku!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
thank you very much :thanks:
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
oh you are so welcome! you have a gift, you truly do. it takes me a lot of words to try to express myself. you use much less and you have more impact, a perfect punch!
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