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winter gave
birth to a baby,
cold and still
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SporeDiatrymisss Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That turned me so cold... ;__;
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keitone Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
three stanzas with a gravity of definition... 
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SeptemberSkies2298 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
unsettling. The contrast between the two meanings is so large - peace and despair.
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AnikaDStewart Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Student Writer
You're right. Unsettling is the perfect way to describe it, in the best possible way of course
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SitaraChe2000 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
how wonderfully sadHeart 
it also forces empathy
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IvanRadev Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a well-written lune, the twist is amazing. I am genuinely impressed.
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cality Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful, and so haunting and tragic. The coldness really comes through, despite the shortness of the poem. <3
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SexyKitty28 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can't explain why this is the most beautiful poem I have ever read. Yes, it's haunting... but absolutely mesmerizing.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
i feel so honoured that you would feel that way about one of my poems :blushes:
thank you so much :heart:
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SexyKitty28 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime, your poetry is absolutely fantastic. :heart:
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