i want to say this is cliche but what i mean is poetic but a mixture of the two... it's out dated god im being so negative what i mean is you're good but im better haha no it's late and i have no idea what im saying it's a really good poem imagination wise it reminds me of this girl i met in hospital. xxx
I could carry into your grammar and such, about how you dared to compare yourself to someone else, let alone rank yourself above them, but...I don't feel like arguing on someone else's comment section. Also, if you're going to call something "cliché," elaborate a little more than vague sentences that basically beat around the bush that you really don't have a reason to claim that. From a literary perspective, your comment rustled me. Sorry. Not really, but sorry.