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i dream of drowning in
lakes, belly up, a petal
shaped bruise of your thumb
on either wrist

i dream that what lays
in my bed is so much
more terrifying than what
lurks underneath it
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Given 2013-11-19
. by *oaklungs ( Suggested by Eremitik and Featured by GrimFace242 )
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SteampunkSoldiers Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Congratulations on your DD!Flying Tard -revamp-You desrved it.
This poem is not only unsettling, but relatable in some eerie way.
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:iconoaklungs:
thank you so much! :thanks:
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:iconmicroscheist:
Fear the one you love.
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SilverInkblot Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! Just a note to let you know that I've featured this piece in my end-of-the-year journal feature :) (Smile)
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:iconoaklungs:
thank you so much :huggle: :rose:
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CosmopolisLanguage Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I worship you. 
Okay, that's extreme. But I love this. The only word that could possibly describe this would be…exquisite. 
Cheers! 
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:iconoaklungs:
don't quite know what to say :thanks:
thank you so much :heart:
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simplythought Dec 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Brilliant! Congrats <3
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jessicaconk Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, this is just gorgeous.
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