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she carries more mistakes than
there are stars, behind her
eyes

a lifetime of
constellations,
a human supernova
yeah, i dunno.
but i know that one day all we'll be is stardust.
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:iconlonelytwinklegrl:
lonelytwinklegrl Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I love the way this sounds...would you mind if i used this as a quote in a story? i would credit you for it
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
of course! i would be honoured :hug:
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lonelytwinklegrl Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:hug: thank you! I shall get right on with the story and adding ur lovely poem....just one question..does it have a name?
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
it doesn't, i'm afraid i don't title anything :(
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lonelytwinklegrl Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:( its still beautiful tho
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NylciaF Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist
I keep reading it again and again, this is really.... wonderful. I love it so much
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
thank you so much :thanks: i'm really glad you like it
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Frostbite365 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can I use this for something I'm drawing? With credit to you, of course~
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
of course you can, that would be lovely :hug:
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Frostbite365 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! :iconeweplz:
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JohnAshleigh Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013   Writer
Such sagacity and innovation. Incredible, actually. Thankyou.

Regards,
John.
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Pandalings Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Whenever I try to write poetry like this it sounds like I gambled my brain for a pig's
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Eremitik Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2013
Our mistakes shape us as much as our successes- much like constellations, we need the darkness to highlight our spots of brightness.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
that is a very refreshing way of looking at things that i hadn't considered until now.
thank you for this :thanks:
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Eremitik Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
You are most welcome. It was certainly my pleasure.
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tiajones Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3 <3 <3 <3

i actually sad sighed.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
i don't know whether that is a good or a bad thing... but, i have a hug for you! :tighthug:

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tiajones Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle:
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JackLotus Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
let your human mistakes shine a little ;)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
ah! i see what you did there ;)
(i have this fear that if i let them shine, they will shine too brightly, and it will be all anyone will ever be able to see of me)
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JackLotus Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They'll be jealous because they can't shine as bright as you, they don't have that boldness.
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HumanKaleidoscope Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
This is lovely. :)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
aw thank you :thanks:
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HumanKaleidoscope Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
Of course. :)
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Anna-Le16 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love it! :heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
:huggle:
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