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i've been breaking out of
hell, but the devil don't
stop me

he slips a return ticket
into my pocket and says,
you're gonna wanna
use this, kid
it's true.
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ShadowedAcolyte Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
Solid.
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BlackSheep6 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i think i can understand the feeling behind this and ... i know it's not a nice feeling, so... *hugs tight* :heart: 
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bluehairedgrrl Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student Writer
what a fascinating idea. love it.
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013   Writer
Congratulations on your DLD! :clap: 
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
thank you! :)
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:iconpomohippie7:
pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2013   Writer
You're quite welcome! It was well deserved. :)
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ssensory Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013   Writer
Congrats on the well-deserved DLD! :la:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
thank you so much!! :heart:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here. Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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jhadelapena Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I so love this! so me XD
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
glad you like it :giggle:
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chihuahua4446 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
I love this one. Its so powerful and the metaphor is so relatable. All your poems use words so powerfully. You just get to the point and its an impressive result. <3 If you ever make a book of poems I would probably buy it.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
well i just, wow :faint:
thank you so much for these kind words
i'm stoked that you like my writing!! :bucktooth:
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declanewan123 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
all the interesting people go to hell?
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
are you asking me or telling me? :giggle:
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declanewan123 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013
i dont know i dont believe in hell so. nice poem though x
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013   Writer
Ohmyword... I love this! Brilliant piece :heart:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
thank you :hug: i'm glad you like it :)
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Lady-Yume Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013   Writer
:heart:
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful poem.
And jep there's always a chance of relapses left .. there are good times and times you just feel like you're in hell .. and eventually you successfully break out. Well, stay strong.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
thank you :thanks: you too
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Pereyga Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconis-lnds:
Is-lnds Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
im sorry this is so true for you
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
it's okay though
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
:hug:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013   Writer
i keep coming back to read this.
still just as brilliant as ever.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
:thanks: thank you so much
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013   Writer
:huggle:
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asecretoutlet Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
I just love your writing. This one does for me in poetry what blues does for me in music. :)
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
thank you :thanks:
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setttingfire Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
simple, but potent.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
:hug: thank you
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17Sevens Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013
Ah, bugger the devil.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
:)
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:iconraidenace:
raidenace Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
totally loved this! very well written:)
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
thank you so much! :)
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xSirMoostache Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol I like this a lot! 
you're so amazingggggg did you know thattt
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013
naaw :iconsupertighthugplz:
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:) this made me smile x 
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
i'm glad it did :) 
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Professional Writer
I need a ticket or two, cause I might be back. LOL
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
are you okay gmm :cling:
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Professional Writer
better than ok. *smiles*
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lilwicked9 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
wow love the poem!
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
i'm glad you like it :hug:
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momo-madness Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013   Writer
ugh you're great.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
:blush: thank you..
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:iconmomo-madness:
momo-madness Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013   Writer
<3
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Miellat Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Student Writer
So short, but so bayutiful~ Your writing is always so energizing to read 
:iconsweethugplz: :heart:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
thank you so much...

and your lovely comments are a pleasure to receive :iconsupertighthugplz:
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