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all we are is cheap
metaphors

goldfish drowning in
the ocean, birds that forget how to
flap their wings, mid-flight
you are strong. you are strong.
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AmavelRedentor Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
damn it, I feel stupid now.

Anyways your work is awesome I'm watching you.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
it is not something to feel stupid about.
thank you so much for watching me :huggle:
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nemutte0no0ame Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013  Student General Artist
Absolutely love this
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
i'm glad you like it :tighthug:
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sherbetblooms Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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If-Cloud-Was-A-Girl Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this.
It's so simple, yet really makes a mockery of "literary geniuses".
The melancholy satire here is very impressive.

One of my favourite poems seen on this sight! Nod 

(PS clever title)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
thank you so much! i'm really glad you like it :bucktooth: :huggle:
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Aerode Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Incredible. The description just ties it all together. :clap:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
:huggle: i'm glad you like it
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Rosella-of-Daventry Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I get it.

I just get it.

Very lovely work. :rose:
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