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a lover leaving his
home for another, a spark
that becomes a flame
(yeah i fucking knew it)
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:icontiajones:
tiajones Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
if you make it "a lover leaves" it'd be a haiku, i think.  (:
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
you're right! now why didn't i see that :(
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:icontiajones:
tiajones Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you can always go back and change it, if you'd like to.
(:
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RainyhawaiiV2 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
This fucking scares me...
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
what is it that's scaring you?
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:iconrainyhawaiiv2:
RainyhawaiiV2 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
I guess it's... a little too fresh. 
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singagainsoon Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ouch. this hit pretty close to home for me right now. who knew such emotion could come from so few words?

this is fantastic.
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:iconoaklungs:
oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
thank you so much :tighthug: i'm glad you like it!
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:iconsingagainsoon:
singagainsoon Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's wonderful in ever sense of the word :hug:
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Professional Writer
this one makes me sad
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