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a lover leaving his
home for another, a spark
that becomes a flame
(yeah i fucking knew it)
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:icontiajones:
tiajones Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
if you make it "a lover leaves" it'd be a haiku, i think.  (:
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:iconoaklungs:
you're right! now why didn't i see that :(
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:icontiajones:
tiajones Oct 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you can always go back and change it, if you'd like to.
(:
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Rainyfirebreather Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This fucking scares me...
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:iconoaklungs:
what is it that's scaring you?
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:iconrainyfirebreather:
Rainyfirebreather Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I guess it's... a little too fresh. 
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singagainsoon Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ouch. this hit pretty close to home for me right now. who knew such emotion could come from so few words?

this is fantastic.
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:iconoaklungs:
thank you so much :tighthug: i'm glad you like it!
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singagainsoon Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's wonderful in ever sense of the word :hug:
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GypsyMountainman Sep 14, 2013  Professional Writer
this one makes me sad
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