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she became a seabed no
anchor could grip, with a
habit of turning everything
into a shipwreck
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kaliannameyron Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
I don't even know what to say about this, it's just such a gorgeous image.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
thank you so much for this :blushes:
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Splash2000 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013   Digital Artist
AMAZING I <3 it!!! Llama Emoji 23 (Shyness) [V1] 
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
glad you like it!! :iconredbullglompplz:
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Splash2000 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013   Digital Artist
No problem ive been reading a lot of poetry latlely as Im thinking about starting, myself :) (Smile) 
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i-am-a-bridgewalker Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
strong, clear, concise, precise, perfect single-image metaphor.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
thank you :thanks:
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
bravo!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
:hug:
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BeyondJen Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. This. :heart:
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Unseen-reality Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love this, it resonates so clearly; lovely writing!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
thank you so much! i'm glad you like it :hug:
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pepper131361 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i love your short poetry that says so very much with so very few words.. you are a talented writter. 0.0 watchin (:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
oh thank you so much for the kind words... :blush: i am glad you like my poetry!
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pepper131361 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
(:
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi! Just wanted to let you know, this has been included in my "More Love For Favorites" feature series here: fav.me/d6hnd6h
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
:excited: thank you!!
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure!
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StanzaMan Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
Short but sweet, its just the right size to convey it's message. kudos on not starting to waffle I know I would be very tempted to on short pieces like these. :)  
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
thank you! :hug:
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Is-lnds Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
hahaha
lets discuss this
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
what do you mean?
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forever-or-yesterday Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
this is absolute art. i adore it.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
thank you so much! i'm glad you like it :)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Amazing. :)
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
:tighthug:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:tighthug:
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frostRazzer Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   General Artist
I love it!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
i'm glad you like it! :)
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frostRazzer Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   General Artist
Can I ask why you don't add a title to your writing? 
It could give a lot more depth or make it more conceptual. I don't write much poetry but it's just a suggestion :D
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
well, i am really crappy with titles. i would rather have no title on some of the pieces than a title that i'm unhappy with and will probably change/delete altogether a few days afterwards :P
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frostRazzer Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013   General Artist
I completely understand haha ;)
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PopCornSalt Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww ;w;
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
:giggle:
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Perfect and succinct.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
thank you :hug:
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure!
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R-Bans Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Shor and original, like it very much.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
thanks! glad you like it :hug:
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