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i would shed my skin
with autumn, but my veins would
crack like the dry leaves
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SCFleischmann Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
It's short and powerful. Would like to know the deeper meaning.
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Philomena-Famulok Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
Heart
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
:tighthug:
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lombregrise Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Professional Writer
You're great work is featured in the "greyshadow's" fav.me/d6tfq3n :rose:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
thank you so much... :huggle:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013   General Artist
so beautiful, this :heart:
congratulations on the DLD, dearling :clap:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
thank you very much :tighthug:
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   General Artist
you are most welcome! :tighthug: :heart:
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Professional Writer
Another one, to love! good job
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
:thanks: thank you so much!
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:+fav:

hi! i hope you don't mind my humble feature:
your lovely piece is handpicked. (link)

thank you.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013
of course i don't mind! :wow: thank you so much!!
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you too. :heart:
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! I'm Jasmine, a staff blogger from :iconpoeticalcondition:. Just to let you know I've featured your piece in this journal: fav.me/d6m91qr
It's a round-up of all of our members who have received a DLD or DD over the past few weeks, so please do check it out!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013
thanks so much! :wow:
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D You're welcome!
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BeyondJen Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful little piece. Great emotion and imagery you've tied up in those three little lines.

Congrats on the DLD. Well deserved.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
thank you very much! :thanks:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our “Pick of the Day”. It is featured in a news article here: dailylitdeviations.deviantart.… and on our main page.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
this is such an honour. from the bottom of my heart, i thank you :hug:
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starshinexx Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is gorgeous. I love the feeling it gives me, especially since autumn will be closing in soon(: I know the feeling.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
oh yes autumn is on it's way!
i'm glad you like it  :happybounce: thank you so much
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starshinexx Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
mhmm!!!Giggle 
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
/crazily in love with haikus

You did this haiku a wonderful amount off justice! There's a lot of feeling packed into an ity-bity 5-7-5.

Wonderfully done, dear. I really enjoyed this read.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
thank you so much, i'm happy that you like it :tighthug:
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautifully done. :love:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013
aw thank you ;)
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, my pleasure. :)
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ssensory Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013   Writer
this is the best haiku I have ever read...

the imagery and bitterness of this is so vivid and earthy.
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