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you said november was a
kick in the teeth
and life goes on
get over it

and i thought god
now i know how the birds feel
lying dead on my kitchen floor
i want this here.
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childwoman Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
This is so intriguing. It really draws you in.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
thank you! :hug:
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formaniac Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Student Writer

You have a new fan.

 

My birthday is in November.

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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Professional Writer
I love your poetry!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
i'm glad you like my writing :thanks: :tighthug:
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:icongypsymountainman:
GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Professional Writer
I am glad you share it!
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AntoinetteGiulia Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel like you pulled this out of my skull.
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
ooh, well i am not quite sure how to respond to that :worry:
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AntoinetteGiulia Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It takes talent!
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